Jack took this easily....only prob.....shorten ur barz man...nobody likes to read a book....lol....other than that it was nice...u had some pretty good rhymes...Create u had some good shit too....but not as aggressive as Jack....

Check one of these:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68980
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68981

peace
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