Was quite pure in the way you depicted the emotions and imagery. You also seemed to try and explore in more depth, with the results being hit and miss (the hits being very much felt). A simplicity that held a BIT of complexity, no, i think more so deep feeling.

...no critique. SOme pieces i just don't feel like criticising (always constructively of course), and this is one of them. For whatever reason, it is my own..

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Funny thing is, i was just browsing through the 2nd page. After replying to your piece. I see you're browsing the forum also. A coincidence, eh?...