cameron...

This dude must be a "rapper from the past" cuz no-one feels his presence (/present)
He changed his name to "dezyir" but his raps are stil full of "irrelevance"
was ok...1st bit was ite...2nd was better

How can you still be ill when you representing "Tha Regime"
Showin love 4 played fiends like wearing throwbacks of dumb teams
yeh this was cool...(but regime are ILL lol)

Dezyir paint a picture with words? Come on. This board can't be for be for real
Only time he's an artist is "painting gay sex" to "brush up on his skills"
wordplay could have been used better...but this was funny

Read the forums, Dezyir's a brownoser.... Why you ask?
Cuz he kisses so much vet butt his nose gets dirty in their ass
wack

You don't "stand a chance" I make you "sit down," ya weak kid
but at least you can tell Tha Regime in LLL tourneys you "was seated"
^^^was ok..ite finish

in general nothin really stood out to me man...maybe 5/10


Thanks for the 'W' G.Hod, matchin me against this dumb kid,
how do you expect respect,w/a mainstream rapper in ya sig?
^^^phrantik used a similar line...but it was nice n tru

Cam gets ripped,punches leave ya face uneven like your bars,
shuttin this fag down swiftly,much like a post bankrupt K-mart,
lol orginal...

the best part of your verse was when if finally came to an end,
how do you expect a win?verse was surpassed by my checkin!
it was nice

..Cameron, there i said it, here comes your 15 minutes of fame,
only time your verse shined is when you mentioned my name,
ok...been used before..not played..just not gr8

whos takes the blame for lettin this wack ass kid in from Bermy,
it must of been a mix up..this is the LLL.. not the poetry tourney
lol nice finisher

7/10.....

no offence to u both but ive seen u both do better verses.....but overall i think irrelivance got this...he had harder and more original punches.......

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