I liked it a lot, the "abstract" stream of conciousness type approach can get cluttered, but this flowed in a unique style that i got a Saul Williams vibe from (practical contradiction) the wordplay was impressively complex yet it seemed so simple, i really liked the beginning "taking on criticism" mode before you stated your "argument". You seem really in touch with what you do/who you are and I cant think of a greater compliment that could be given. Keep up the good work.