Thread: ~"Reppin"~
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Old 07-31-03, 05:05 AM   #9
MultiVersEal
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From: murdaland
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^ knows what hes talkin about


sorry about last nite hahah anyway. if you use a simpler beat maybe you could flow better. also the rhymes and structure were very simple, i think if you added adjectives and shit like that.

runnin with the west coast until the day i die/
im smokin that blue haze that elevate me to a skyscraper high/
we get by
my crew gon find you and da hydrashoks ensure you die/

somethin like that. na mean but first pick a simpler beat to flow to.

pz
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