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Only Death Makes Us Think
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07-31-03, 06:12 AM
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ManOwaR
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nice concept... even though tha flow wasn't real tight your topic and ideas made up for it alot...
I'd work on tha hook though... make it just a tad bit more catchy...
keep writing...
peace...
ManOwaR