Heres how I break it down
MULTIES - NONE
WORDPLAY- NONE
FLOW- R-Dot Capone by far ---
"The way i'm beating this kid i'll be tracked by social services/
R-Dot's the lyrical legend. Slim is just the herb in this/"- Nice Line
STYLE- Slim_Lanky --- No matter how bad his grammar is, he still had rhymes everywhere.

Slim this wasnt decent just keep elevating I think you need to work on your grammar the most. Before you send your verse reread it and make sure it makes sense. "I aint 50 but I know my shit I wil crush you like an ant and may you sick". That is what I mean.

Capone- Your started out decent. Just keep it all that way. GREAT opening. Keep it like that and you will be a force to reckon with here on RB.

Winner- RDotCapone