sureal, sorry but i dont think you took this.
you put up a good fight, but you showed me
why the style isnt the strongest for flow.
i read your piece 4 times just then, and i know you
had words that rhyme but i never picked up on your
flow. it was missing rhytm. and even tho you had a good
piece well written with a nice concept, i dont think you
pulled it off. Sand came with fire, his verse was deep, well
expressed, flow came out very appearant and on point.
his vocab was good, and maybe it was just his set up that made
it easier to find the rhythm.
v: sand.

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