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Old 07-31-03, 07:23 PM   #27
Kobra
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From: Blackpool
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Right here we go

Jack Tha Rippa

Nice Opener liked it hit hard but after that you kinda went downhill with punches, flow etc. once you hit hard with an opener you've to follow it up with some lines of the same quility

Overall- 6/10

Swift

Nice overall verse i liked Jacks opener more than most of your lines but you were the more consistant of the two the flow never really went off i liked the complexness (if thats a word) of your verse made you wanna bounce to it more

Overall- 8.2/10

Vote- Swift