u were right..cause im wonder n y i read this..hopefully this was just a bad drop..if not..u got some work to do..it was almost there..wit a better vocab..more multis..and a better flow..this woulda been ight..the concept was cool..u just didnt hit it hard enough..u had a lot of so so lines that coulda been real nice..and then the end n..WOW..it made the drop even worse..but like i said..some nice thoughts and ideas..u just need to elaborate on em..work on ya flow..and better multis..