the last few bars of the 2nd post seem real familiar..like i heard it before..mainstream rapper..but i dunno..dont really care..

anyways..

1st 1 - flow was nice..some nice lines..the begin n got a lil boring wit all the ever shit..but kinda creative at the same time..that would sound better in audio..not a bad post tho..what was the infasis on certain words for?..the capitalized words..

2nd 1 - flow was good..lines were real short tho..not a bad piece..flow made it nice..some ok lines in there..