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Old 07-31-03, 10:58 PM   #10
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Damn. Excellent verse here. Moving, really.
You did a great job with this, ReccA, the imagery and the smooth flow made it that much easier for the strong content to hit the reader.

>Somewhere there is a motherless child sitting in ear piercing silence
Witnessing the violence and cruelty of human nature at its finest

The imagery in those two lines just stunned me. Really well written.
This was an overall excellent drop, I really enjoyed reading it.
I dont agree with the person before me who said there was a "twist" at the end, however..cuz its obvious from the first few lines that this "somewhere" is earth. Sadly enough.
Nice writez.
Stay up. pz.
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