hey gurly... dunno if you remember me? I remembered that you had helped me out in the past when I needed some advice jus through the board an whatnot an I remembered likin ya poems so I thought to stop in... seems like a lot of the older people on here have gone for bad additude twoards people not replying or not completely understanding things. What happened there? I mean damn gettin a guilt trip for some one replyin to my ish...? To tha peice:
Not gonna sit here an say what I think this peice was about because I don't wanna be told that I don't understand you or your work... I don't know you prolly don't understand you but I still don't like to be told things like that smell me?
I was loving the imagry in this peice. The words you chose to depict your emotions were amazing! The line homeboi picked out was by far what stood out in my mind. (I know I'm wrong) But I got a lil out of it that you may have not completely understood what was going on... or there mighta been several emotions or things goin wrong and they were all tuggin at the same time... the foot prints in the concrete verses what people commonly hear "sand" makes me thing that the commitment was a bit more permenate than what sand might be, washing away verses always being there... and I don't know what this peice was on, first conclusion obviously would be a relationship gone bad. But I've written peices that seem that way to others an aren't I didn't get annoyed but I'm openly admitting my assumption maybe wrong.. anyways I thought this was a beautiful peice and I enjoyed readin it, stay up gurl an I'm lookin for more of ya work peace