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Originally posted by spliviticus
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horrible verse. sorry but it really was. it didn't flow right and it had poor structure. Your lyrics were very simple and when u did try to bring vocab the line didnt even make sense. Sounded like you just tried to use words that didnt even work with one another. It also lacked any real punches. seemed more like an open mic.
Ill Mental<<<F.A.G.
You're shit didn't even need to be that good. You had decent punches and your shit made sense... thats all that mattered. Your structure was good. Lines were short and to the point. You lacked vocab but you didnt really need it. werd on the MM line. kid got voted off like surviver.
Vote: Const... no.. Ill Ment... no.. yeah... Ill Mental
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i couldnt have said it better myself!
can you guys hit this up ?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69017
peace