Lmao, the mutli's were forced to hell, lines were stretched so your flow was off, nothing id really quote, the whole 'break up in between lines' is wack, makes you look like a herb, dont do it, and the // thing is to make sure the bars are even, why use it when your bar lengths are all over the place?!

This piece was pretty weak IMO, very basic rhyming and you need to learn how to use REAL multi's first. This was pretty wack, but i'll put it down to it being a keystyle. .

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