Rhyming/Flow
Dopeness, The Flow Was Smooth All The Way Through, You Had Killa MUlti's In here As Well: "Pacing the Chrome halls armed with but a Bucket & Rag
behind the glass, something moved, figured 'fuck it' & ran" - THought That Was Dope..lol .... 9/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You Really DEscribed The Actions, MInute By MInute If You KNow WHat I mean, You WEnt Really In Detail About It. Mad Vocab, Lot of Good Wordplay Here Too: "Noise sounded troubled. Some sort of wild hybrid creature" ....9/10

Concept/Topic
Brutal Original Topic, I Always Like catz Who Give A SHort Description At The Beginning, It Helps Us Understand It more, You KNow..You PLayed It well, Spreading It Out Evenly....9/10

Overall
9/10 - Nothing Really Wrong With THis, It Was Dope As Hell...Brilliant Stroy-Telling Song, Was Worth The REad & I Hope To See more Of It In Future

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