^Exactly, basic rhyme scheme, flow was blah, opening war was pathetic, zero compl;exity, vocab was blah, no imagery, no emotion, no multi's, no internals, everything was real basic, and text disses are gay anyways.
Go away and write a piece to a set topic, like the death of a loved relative or something, thats where it'll show your real skill.
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