This was aiight... very basic... but pretty nice for 13. Some of the verses were choppy and made no sense... for instance...

'sometimes i thought i was neva born to include...wid the places u went to.i always hated bieng on the pedastool, always having to only talk to the people cool, not the ones who actualy enjoyed to go to school'

'always having to only talk to the people cool' makes no sense. I know what you were tryin' to say, but the words were all twisted around so the final words of the lines would rhyme... you know.. decent for 13 though like I said... Peace...