Sonic its a wee bit hard to pick up your rhyme scheme maybe its just me its hard to judge a rhyme if its just typing. You seem to use nice bank of words not the obvious/easy ones like e see, u two, you get what I mean. The way you express your dialect by ispelling words is also a bit confusing at times, maybe you say ahead of time what they sound like. Alright Later, Lyrigenic it was cool it seems you pick words ahead of time and try to find a way to link them instead of going natural, but I get you. Aight. Holla.