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Old 08-01-03, 04:49 PM   #7
C-NiCe
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i dont think you sound like eminem, i think its just a similar style.....but anyway, your delivery was off at the beginning, but you caught your flow like 5 seconds after, so dats good.....ummm i wasn't really feelin the hook to this, i thought it was weak, and your girl ain't really add emotion to it....you pause in your verses a little bit....i kinda noticed it...try not to do dat as much, cuz it throws you off your flow and course of beat.....but stay up, this was a good drop...OnE



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