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I'm no longer gettin my fix kickin half-witted rimixes dissin these kids
one week merkin five or six add a pink slip you just made it on my finishin list
^punches

And your style I'm diminishin it, break ya bones till ya ligaments bust out and poke through ya clothes
Search the body for the wallet and phone but he prolly broke so I leave it alone
^punches

Slaughter cats often hit da new fish, pairin us up is like a shark and a dophin
Death is iminent bitch cause I just harpoon ya rhymes wit my visual spits
^some of that is punches

its a murder on some ritual shit, ya better evacuate the buildin of all the women n children
Cus I crush ya feelins, my words they hurt, but before ya bounce take ya skirt and ya purse
^some of that is punches

I can see whats missin, Your rhymes lack vision, wack cats get no recognition.
Don't think of comin near my home where im livin, da 45 chrome will leave ya dome drippin
got dope writtens? Ya must be trippin, my record on the rise gotcha ass on the line
Ya think ya fine but we'll see how the votes go, Ya hardest line was just so so guy
he wonders why his wins get deprived, speakin at me is suicide, thats why
im chiefin ya bleedin leavin ya verse weakened, shit i can spit harder lines when i'm geekin
ya attitude seemin like ya wanna be pac But hes seasoned, he dope n ya not
My rhyme stock ll leave ya run up n shot, cus i'm raw from the gun up... the one in my sock
^all punches except the very last line isnt really a punch

punches dont have to be "punchlines." They don't have to be funny. And like carcuz said, i didnt even need punches anyway. You lost easy, just give it up. Stop tryin to sway votes cus it aint happenin. Your only decent line:

"I aint gonna lose, I ain't doomed"

and that wasn't a punch. That was a diss toward him.

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