I'm glad you decided to keep dropping even though that biting thing went on. Since this one is good, and a prime target for biters, I'll keep a lookout for it on the other boards I read from

This reply probably won't be as long as the others I've given. What else can I say about how you write that hasn't already been said by me or someone else? Ok, here goes..

The stuff I've been reading lately, it seems like people are trying to make what they write so complicated. They try to get so many syllables and huge words into a writing that they lose sight of what they are writing about. You never do any of that. You stay on topic with everything really well. It's always easy to follow what you're saying. Especially with this you wrote here. This one had a lot more emotion put into it than the others I read of yours. You really described how bad you felt throughout the whole thing.

"And in the quiet of the eve, i silently grieve; fight to keep my deep cries under wraps..
But alone, and unknown, I dont quiet my hearts tone; unrestrained, I've even collapsed,
dropping everything, falling in the middle of the floor, to bawl like a child in a tantrum..
Letting all that I'm feeling release then and there; the screaming and sobbing, my anthem."

"Almost wishing you removed of my memory and heart, but i know soon enough i'd regret to..
But I cant help but think how easily i'd forget you, or unmiss you.. if i'd never met you........"

Those are the lines I really liked. I felt the second quote a little too much. So instead of making this one really long I'll just leave it at that. Keep posting.