Hmm..had to read a couple times...this reminded me of a piece we read in English....i forgot that guys name....I think he was from the romanticism period tho..not quite sure..i'll remember when i'm done here

but any who...I probably did not catch ur meaning..I wont act like i did....but this is what i got out of it

Weaving a web,
One must fall.
Motions crack.
Solace in life,
And the return.
.........reminds me of that old sayin...if u get knocked off ur horse..get back on and try....the one must fall...then the return part...kinda hit me....solace in life.....then it reminded me of the world turning..and how everyone is in there right place..and supposed to do there certains tasks..(don't ask why..i think unlike many)



this was my fav. stanza
Too simple is this,
Doing litte justice.
I weep thoughts,
Never to be written.
Maybe for better,
Implosion the worst..
..........its beautiful..could be its own poem..lol......but then again i'm a person for short pieces ..and pieces that contain everything within itself.....i weep thoughts never to be written..that hit me the hardest...iw ish i could explain why..but it just did

Nice V..but then again i always respected your work...

God bless....1