Ok well, not only was J RIZZ feeding, he did many other things.

1- none of his lines rhyme. what the hell is up with that?
2- no rhymes = no flow, this is a rap battle, not an argument.
3- you had a couple multis in one line but... it doesnt make sence at all.
4- just about half of that was feedin and it took you almost an hour to make it.

Ok so, my vote goes to wallbanger.