Rhyming/Flow
MUlti's Were Crushed Togther, You Need To Spread Them Out, INstead Of Pushing Them All into a Few Bars! The Multi's You Did Have Were O.k, But Could Have Been Better....5/10

Vocab/Wordplay
NOt MUch Vocab here, You Really Need To Complexiate It, Mos Def. REad A Dictionary Or Something...Work On Wordplay Too:...2/10

Concept/Topic
This Is A PLayed Topic, Why Make a Title, But Keep Walking Away From It?, Confusing To me...0/10

Overall
4/10, You Need Help To elevate, Up Your Flow, Vocab , Everything Nearly...

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