I'm Not Goin' To Break This Down, Mainly Because I'm Sittin IN FRont Of My Screen, With My eyes Half Closed With Boredem, o.k:

You had Some Nice LInes Here, Good Use Of Multis, Especially here: "ways of the world leaves me in confusion/
hate an death bein a simple conclusion/", That Was A Great Opening.

However It fell Of FRom There, (Apart From The Next Bar).

Vocab Was Average, Could Expand It more Though, And Through IN Some Worpdlay To Keep Us Entertained! Was A Decent Topic, You Spread It OUt Well..Props.

7/10 - THought iT Was O.k, Try Top keep The Bars The Same length Though, Up Your Vocab As Well