This was a beautiful peice and I kinda felt like the simplicty served it well... "I feel so dumb, yet so smart" That was my favorite line... makes me think of "If I knew then what I know now" and this was a very personal peice. I liked it, the flow was very calming and even for the most part. And it did kinda seem like a bit of a lyrical peice to me... I liked the progression, and the depiction, pretty much of a story line, lovin how you filled the reader in. And the last line to each stanza was a wonderful contribution to tying it all together. Sorry for ya pain hun, but it sure does make for some amazing poetry... peace