Certainly nothing but love.

Y'know when other people write their poetry and I read it, I read it like it's a painting. I can look at it, even understand it, and appreciate the work a person put into it. I can find the parts that really shine and the parts that really need work.

But you tend to go beyond that. Because more often then not when I read others poetry, it doesn't touch me. It's like my heart is trapped in concrete and while I can appreciate poetry I can't feel it. But you tend to write differently, because when I read your stuff I can actually feel it.

I dunno if I feel all the emotions you've put into this peice, or even if I felt the right ones. Like the beginning and the end, I didn't feel anything when I read it. But the middle part, it was like someone broke a dam and all the water came rushing out.

It's hard to explain, it's like words don't have any real meaning until you've written it down.

I mean seriously, if you had an entire book of poetry, I'd honestly try and read it cover to cover in one sitting if I could. I mean you should be a poet laurete.

Anyway, this has been my attempt at showing you that you are better then you think you are. (That, or it's that time of the month and I'm just overly emotional. Which is really weird cause I'm a guy and all.)

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.