Rhyming/Flow
Was Pretty Good, The Flow However Fell Off in Some PLaces...You Need Top Work ON That, Gettin It FRom Good Up To Tight! .... 5/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You had Some Good Vocab IN Some PLaces, BUt You Need To EXpand It A Bit...You Wordplay Was Good, I Personally LIked THis Line :"not on wallstreet but i walkstreet and walk streets" - Good Attempt, Work On It THough.....7/10

Concept/Topic
I Didn't Honestly See A Correspondence Between The Title And The Gangsta Concept. You Need To PIck A Relating Title n' Concept, Preferrably One That Is True TO Life, Cos i Very Much Doubt Your "i pop geeks" ... 2/10

Overall
4/10, Work On The Above Mentioned, Vocab, FLow, n' Topic...Hope THis Helps You Elevate. Tip: Go To The Tutorial Forum, Theres Alot There That Can Help ou Tone Up Your Skills..

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