Thread: -Rotary Heart-
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Old 08-03-03, 12:24 PM   #12
varentao
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The loss of a soul mate, a best friend, a lover..
A sadness with a cure i've yet to uncover.

^^Those cemented in your other words. Actually, more so my own thoughts and emotions (but then again, not really cemented, just some more hard 'knocks'..). But seriously, the body of the piece built up a basic picture. But those last two lines just made the other parts kind of obsolete to me (in a personal way).

Felt hard and deep.

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