You did good writing this. Like Varentao said, it was a raw piece. I liked reading it. The first line of it drew me in. You started it out with an..emotional line, I guess. I thought that was a good way to do it.

"i don't love you no more, atleast i don't feel that way
i just care like i cared for you during your troubling days"

I like that part of it right there. Keep posting more like this.