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Old 08-03-03, 03:26 PM   #7
RythmicTendicies
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Rhyming/Flow
Was Hott By Both Catz, Although I Felt That Silk Took It, But Bash Wasn't Far Behind. You Both Had Mad MUlti's In Your Verses,..Fav Line BASH: "thinking of past decisions I wanted to make
so many different positions I wanted to take
"

Fav Line Silk: "Each Day You Wanna Give Up, Dont, Can You Imagine Life-In-Cuffs
When Its Seems To Like To Much, Take It, Cuz Life-Is-Enough
" ...8/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Both Had Killa Vocab....You Used The Right Words Inorder To Get Your Own View n' Feelin's Across...8/10

Concept/Topic
The Content Sort-Of Reminded Of "Religiois Atheist" Cos You Were Both - Bash Especially - Rappin' ABout religion. Silk Howver Took The mORE Povity Striken Approach, But You Both Stayed On The Topic And PLayed It Well..9/10

Overall
8/10, I Felt Silk Came OUt Stronger Here, But You Both Had Good Verse's, The Hook Was Tight, Really Corresponded To The Rest Of The Song....Brutal!

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