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Old 08-04-03, 05:34 AM   #5
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yo on the real son, the vocab and the content was ill, but unfortunately i feel the syntax within the bars is terrible ya know...the flow needs work no doubt....it prolly ounds better as an audio, but as a textual piece it was 6 out of 10
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