ok well ill start with the bad.......the name lol i dont like it....not very original.....

also the topic....Death and destruction ain't the answer........sorry but i tend to disagree

for the topic the emotion is straight on target. defenately passionate in the words you used to describe your topic....

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life has gone from color, to black and white, to straight up gray.

a leader don't leave his people fearin the worse. look out tha window, see a thousand hearses creepin down the street. like birds wit broken wings flyin through an empty sky