ight ima start with i dont approve of the rhyme scheme.....
i see a lot of pepz rhyming here an i just think ya should try thinkin outside that frame of reference.....okay enough said.....moving on

the only other prob is i think ya missin somethin in that first line.....itz a dope line but it seems to be missing something....

ok on to tha good......so i must remain looking for my "writers groove"
let the pen express, ill replace the ink.
then sit.... ??? ... i can only think...

lol @ writer's groove awsome word choice......

trying to find creativity.. i try reading a book.
front to end. like my life its been over.

also a dope line

there was a lot of good to this poem esp for some1 who claimed to be sufferin writaz block