tis was an o.k drop, i liked it, you had multi's which was really what shined in this piece, you had some good metaphors here and there, nothing spectacular but it was good enough for a constructive piece.
off the dome, of course I know this was a keystyle, but i write off my dome every open mic that iv'e posted in my life, no editing, so all my open mics are just keystyles. Good shit, i post keystyles like this to excess shit off my mind, overall i liked this shit, hopin to read more from you, and please return the favor and peep my new piece called "rage of a mortal" i'm lookin for some good criticism or whatnot.
pz...

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