You were angry...and to me...this piece wasn't Great. It didn't rhyme in alot of places, had no real flow, had no real meaning, except tha you don't like this guy. You need to elevate ALOT. try lookin at other Open Mics and try to use different styles. Return tha favor and peep my piece "Rage of a Mortal", lookin for some good feedback, no bullshit.
pz..

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