woah. this was amazing. not only did your vocab
appeal to me, but your structure was so wonderful.
and the truth behind your writing, it would intrigue
everyone. your opener caught my attention and
held it as i continued.. i really did love this peice.
and i could feel your sorrow.. your choice of words,
probably wrote after a break up... or somethin around
that area of thought...

The loss of a soul mate, a best friend, a lover..
A sadness with a cure i've yet to uncover.

im sure everyone's felt a loss like this, and if they havent
they will... this truly captures everyones thoughts on a
matter like this and words it so perfectly.

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