I'm freezing but also burning up/
~Niacin Can Do That If Its Cold Outside..And Help You~
~Pass Urinalysis Tests...Decent Imagery To Start Off With~
~Going Deeper The Only Thing It Lacks~

I have so much & not enough/
I'm here but I'm being erased/
I come back only to be missplaced/
I feel lost but I'm easy to find

~Your Wordplay Picked Up And Definately Got Better~

I'm sinking in a pool of quicksand/
I'm looking but i never find any land/


~Could Sound Better Reworded..Do Not ~
~Take Constructive Criticism To Heart You Have Talent~

Alright Piece Carmine..Catchy Name...Peace