umm..read it all, its not long and im tryin a new style, need good feedback on each line and which were dopest.

yo. .
this is the LETHAL lyricist league, go where u need to be.
cuz only time he's gotten a W is after T U V! (lmfao)
see, my lyrics 'enchant his mind' like puttin 'spells to his dome'.
when its time to attack he 'rolls over' like 'cellular phones'!
this maniac's gonna have a 'brain attack'. . and get 'hit by mind'!
he's like the child at the back of line. . cuz the kids behind.
kids the kind, to have no 'taktik' except for 'in his name'.
reach his only GOAL. . but instant messenger is his AIM! (its in his sig)
its insane, but its like a 'toast game' the way he 'roll play' faulty.
he's married to style. . and i cause splits like adultery!
use ctrlaltdel, like 'descendin components' he will fall 'part.
cant sell an album. . so he rolls back the prices like wall-mart!


yo, dont vote by whoever has the most ~~~~~ and ''''''
hed win that.............lol sry taktik but u lways do do that.


vote fair and break down well please.
im ill.

yo tak match plz