well theres def room for improvement n shit but for being in ya early stages of ya steez u def have potential.. stay focused,dedicated n just keep at it n u'll elevate in no time yo.. this overall wasent WACK.. it wasent ground breakin either but its all an experience dawg.. regardless, keep droppin.1

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//