aigh nice drop my man so far i have like all ur pieces i have read


FLOW
it was good had nice structure kinda skipped out in one place but u recovered it quickly had flow from line ta line but the line its self didnt flow all the time

VOCAB/WORDPLAY ur voocab was eexcellent u used complicated words in place of simple words to give it not only character but also complexityther was some inline flow but it was mostly line to line which is cool

TOPIC
it was a good topic used alot but u pulled it threw and made the piece your own u got it across clearly but didnt over kill it, it also had nice form

CRITISIM
i really don have much to say here but next time when u drop try and make it ryme/flow within a line and tha it goes along with the next one and member alweays not to stary off the topic that u lines make sense when they all to gether (not tha u did jus a reminder)

OVERALL
8/10



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