good vocabulary...something that this board has a great lack of but ur vocab was on point spelling on the other hand...the piece was complex in its vocab and the way it flowed yet had a certain twist of simplicity that made the poem even more impactful. I wasnt sure wut to you would offer on a poetic level and u pleased with this piece im not into portraying myself as divine because i'm all but, however it wasnt an inept remark because it progressed the poem overall, in short...props, 1luv.