well....wasn't feelin the hook...wasn't really anything special about it.....both emcees delivery was kinda off, then you caught your flows, but then speeded up cuz you tried to keep up with the beat, so u started rappin fast...you dont really have to do this, just break down your lyrics, so it everything fits....unless the beat is fast pace, then thats a different story, but going fast because u tryin to keep up only makes u lose track of the beat.....remember everything is a 4 count....just keep that in mind.....this was iight tho, keep doing your thing....OnE




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