Thread: Burnt Bridges
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Old 08-05-03, 01:22 PM   #4
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Originally posted by Black_Soulja
that was iight

needs a hook doe


Lmao...U need too be banned for dat small response...Anyways Phrantik this drop was Nice , Ur Rhyming/Flow was on point , u had a heavy amount of multies , U just know how too put ur emotions into lyrics , The tittle was really creative..And it did described what this open mic would be about.....U put real thought into this....Great Lyrics man....I was feelin it....U get a 10/10

I burnt the bridges, golden hopes revoked my old devotion
now prone and hopeless, out of focus w/ my own emotions.

^^^^That was 2 Sick starting Lines....When I read the first 2 lines , I knew this piece would be Great....It's like u fed off these 2 Lines...
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