Special Ghost To Blow
From: Pittsburgh,Pennsylvania Baby |
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IP:
This Was Definately Straight From The Heart
The One Thing That Made This Not Seem As
Well As It Could Be Was.....
left me outta the blue, i had no clue
i was lost, didn't know what to do
depressed for a week or two
scared, didnt know what my life would come to
~Other Words Could Hav Been Used To Possibly~
~Add More Imagery And Making It More Enticing To~
~The Readers...You Might Agree..You Might Not~
~Your Hearts Definately In This Though~
Some Of Your Words Were Just Used
Over And Over Again Througout This
Piece Which Made This Less "Reader Friendly"
Your Emotions There Without A Doubt..Elevate
Peace
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