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Old 08-05-03, 02:48 PM   #8
cameronj86
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A qucik key off the top, just what I thought of his verse........

Kid ya raps faulty, with ya wack multies, ya game is unseen, must be below the surface
you stretch and "cheat in bars" like bartenders commit adultry, half ya punchlines have no purpose
"X" marks the spot so he is getting a "L 4 real!" That's common logic
I roll on you and pop like a firestone wheel, the only place ya raps take you is "OFF TOPIC"
I Would put "warm up" and "i'm thinking" in my verse, but its clear I already won
This one was mines before it started like you got diqualified for jumpin the gun
While I illustrate great lines, XL4real states fakes lines and wastes time
Since all he does is make noise and sway he should change his name to "wind chimes"
You aint even said a punchline, don't worry, you still got me laughing
Cuz ya scripts unintentionally funny, like communitty broadcasting