yea i liked this piece...multi's were good..which is always my favorite lol..worded nicely..vocab was pretty good....jus good verse overall

Favorite lines
live life to the fullest and I hate every single hour-I-spend//
cowardz-pretend to be ya friend only to let you down-in-the-end//
all the good I've done in my life has been overpowered-by-sin//
now-I-begin to realize that when I get jumped the first one'z to stomp me out-are-my-friendz...
I'm not afraid of death...cause to me there'z nothing as scary-as-life//
my mind'z been buried with strife and I can't trust noone so I alwayz carry a knife//


dope ...8/10 keep it up boo