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Old 08-05-03, 04:50 PM   #2
Baron Mynd
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Gynacolgist / pussy lines ive seen a couple times before, so their kinda played
UT's line had madd potential, if you worded that better it would of been dope!
Purple faced / breathless nice personal, should of made it into a punch rather than keepin it as a set up.
PMs & IM line, -ouch!- nice personal there cause i heard other people help him write his stuff too.
Blowing line, again, would of made for a pretty good line if you'd flipped it better, originality was there though.
Hand in the cookie jar line was nice, good multi use towards the end.
Forcing Multi's / Twins ive seen used before, but it wasnt a bad concept.
Real colours finisher was ok, again, could of been worded better for impact, but not bad.

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