umm excuse me BITCH but u should stop posting so many poems, check teh rules you're only allowed two poems on the first page, just thought i'd holla at u before a mod caught it, jsut chill out, now to the piece....
I like questioning poems because they make the reader think though in a not so subtle way lol. umm wasnt funny but anyway i really can see wut ur feeling cause Lord knows a nigga been there before but i feel like u didnt let that rawness that emotion has come thru enough, in a poem i like to look into a kaleidoscope but this poem was more like looking thru glass, it has potential but that flavor isnt there, props though, and could u gimme a feedback on my piece, thanks, 1luv.